Through the eyes: Darkly
How does one portray evil? Do we depict its abominable
ugliness, or do we show the whole person—a blend of normality and perversion?
For millennia, humans have shared stories of good triumphing
over evil. Traditionally, these stories were told, described, and narrated.
From the Bible to The Canterbury Tales, the narrator or writer would recount
events as they happened, often accompanied by illustrations to enhance
understanding.
With the advent of live visual media, such as movies and television, the art of storytelling has evolved. Almost all writing programs now emphasize the mantra, "Show, don’t tell." While any rule in a creative and dynamic medium like literature is bound to have exceptions, this style is strongly preferred, especially in academic and university settings. However, this approach often carries an undercurrent of editorializing, glorifying heroes while condemning evil.
In my novel, *Crimson Mirage (CM)*, we take a unique
approach. Most of the story is narrated through the eyes of the protagonist,
Manush. The format resembles a movie camera, allowing the reader to
"see" the narrative and explore the environment. Descriptions
occasionally incorporate non-visual senses, such as smell or touch, which a
camera cannot capture. However, in *Crimson Mirage*, there is no commentary on
the morality or righteousness of the scenes. Readers are mature adults, capable
of interpreting the sequences and forming their own judgments.
Consider the movie *Schindler’s List*. In one scene, filmed
as a long shot, SS guards are seen shooting prisoners. The characters occupy a
corner of the frame, and their interaction appears mundane—until some people
suddenly fall to the ground. Without context, the depravity and horror of the
crime are not immediately apparent. It looks disturbingly like an ordinary day.
That’s what real crime often looks like.
But what happens when we view it from the perpetrators’
perspective? Does it go too far? Does it risk normalizing evil? In *Crimson
Mirage*, a character who has cold-bloodedly murdered a helpless youth justifies
his actions to an adoring crowd. He invokes the "safety of the
country" and even laments that no one appreciates his kindness in
returning the body for a proper funeral.
This may infuriate some readers—that a monster is given a
platform to defend himself. But that is precisely the intent of this technique.
It forces readers to confront how mundane evil can be, how seamlessly it
coexists with us, and how easily it can be rationalized. Evil doesn’t announce
itself with horns or fire-breathing nostrils. It looks like you and I. It
claims its own brand of morality. It can be a father, a sister, a husband—and
sometimes, even a good one.
I’ve witnessed this firsthand. A friend’s father, a police
officer, was the quintessential annoying adult during our adolescence—always
concerned about our safety, keeping us out of trouble, and earning my parents’
trust as a reliable guardian. To make matters worse, he was deeply religious
and constantly peppered us with moral stories.
Years later, I learned from an independent source that he
had led a "hit squad" responsible for dragging Naxalite youths from
their homes at night and executing them. I never had the chance to hear his
side of the story, but I imagine it might have resembled the scene I described
earlier. Yes, this man inspired that moment in the novel.
Simply condemning an evil act oversimplifies it. It provides
an escape route, allowing us to distance ourselves from the evil within and
claim moral superiority. But the truth is that all of us harbor the potential
for evil. It’s only a matter of time and circumstance before it manifests. To
confront the "bad guys," we must first look within ourselves.
The truly terrifying part isn’t the existence of evil—it’s realizing that it could have been one of us.
GENRE: Political Psychological Thriller
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Naïve Passionate Dangerous.
Manush is all of these—and more. Caught between the heat of first love
and the fire of revolution, he confuses desire with destiny and activism with
annihilation. What begins with tender hope ends in blood-soaked betrayal.
Set against the turbulent backdrop of Calcutta’s Naxalite uprising,
this haunting debut novel unravels the journey of a boy-turned-assassin—his
convictions twisted, his soul scarred, his story unforgettable.
The author grew up in the heart of this upheaval, witnessing firsthand
how political fervor tore through families and futures. Crimson Mirage is not
just fiction—it’s a reckoning. A meditation on blind love, brutal reprisals,
and the elusive promise of freedom.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Excerpt
Two:
Beads of persperation had appeared on her temple, shining
like moving pearls in the indirect light. Manush was mesmerized. She looked
beautiful!
Mita looked at him impatiently. “How long will the boy be?
Is he fetching tea leaves from the Darjeeling Tea Gardens?” she smiled. An old
joke, still, Manush smiled with her.
But his heart missed a beat. This was the first time she had
smiled only for him. He was happy, angry, pleased, agitated, frustrated—and,
above all, confused. What did he want from her? More importantly, did she want
anything from him?
He remembered his ‘guru’, a college Casanova at Residency.
The bloke had taken upon himself the mission of bringing simpletons like him up
to speed on how to swing it with girls. The chap sermoned, “Never get confused
about a woman. If you feel that way with anyone, turn and run like the wind.
Unless you do that, she’ll chew you alive… that is, if she’s kind; an evil one
will hook you at the end of a line and play with you as you drown.
“Charge like a bull, ask, don’t be sheepish or bashful
around women. If the response is ‘Yes’, very well, you’re lucky, buy movie
tickets for two. If her response is ‘No’, buy a bottle of Old Monk rum from our
good old Shaw & Co.—call me if you can’t handle the whole bottle alone—weep
through the night. The next morning, when you’re fit, look around for new
pastures.”
Manush sighed. As usual, it was easier to preach than act.
He did not want to admit he had that indefinable ‘something’—adolescents would
call it a ‘crush’—for Mita. But he did not have the courage to ask. If she
said, ‘No, ’ he did not have the foggiest idea what he would do. So, he stuffed
his feelings in a limbo jar…‘Time in a Bottle…and flew around it in circles.
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AUTHOR Bio and Links:
The author is a professional who grew up in Kolkata during the turbulent times that serve as the backdrop of this novel. He has written short stories and articles. This is his debut novel. More of his writing at babujee.substack.com/archive.
Website: https://mailchi.mp/996745dceee3/crimson-mirage



5 comments:
Thank you so much for featuring CRIMSON MIRAGE.
Thanks for hosting my book, Check out the latest independent review at https://babujee.substack.com/p/crimson-mirage. Feel free to ask questions.
Sounds like a good book.
Do you write on the weekends?
Sounds like an interesting book.
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