The decision to take my first novella Canes and Scales and
turn it into an epic fantasy didn’t come easily. In fact, at first I wanted
write two more novellas and create a series. Luckily Elizabeth North at
Dreamspinner advised me to go for one large novel. Good thing--- I’d probably
still fuss over finishing the series.
This time I outlined the chapters, not the norm for me. I’ll
draft rough outlines, but this time I wanted control. I already struggled with
stylistic problems__ my writing had changes in the last few years. Of course my
main characters Alasdaire and Linden wanted more page time – what character
doesn’t want more time to shine—but at a certain point they decided not to play
nice with the storyline. They rebelled. Alasdaire and Linden
refused to “talk” to me anymore. It’s a wacky but true concept. The total disconnect drove me batty.
I originally planned to release the novel on its third
anniversary.
That didn’t happen since Alasdaire and Linden
delighted in shunning me. Fine. I shunned them in turn and worked on other
short stories and novels. Ocassionally I’d poke at an earlier chapter that
needed work, or realize I needed a strong new character to help the plot.
Unfortunately, the novel refused to move past a certain sticky chapter.
Until the EUREKA!
evening. A mental orgasm provided the solution. Did I really intend to stage a
kidnapping along with more torture? Much of the novel is based around natural
magic. Why wasn’t I listening to the book? Why not let the magic work for the
characters?
Once I moved past my nefarious plans for Alasdaire and Linden,
they worked with me. Together we created an entirely new ending. Everyone felt
happy. Alasdaire escaped kidnapping and torture. Linden
escaped mental disintegration.
And I escaped from thinking I’d never finish my book!
Thanks, Dawn, for letting me work out my issues.
Here’s an excerpt
PG
Excerpt Canes & Scales M/M fantasy S.A. Garcia
LINDEN
My
trunks bobbed past along with my bags. I chuckled; it looked like my two travel
trunks had sprouted legs. “Still running splendidly as always, eh, Anders?”
Raised
voices echoing from the left interrupted Anders’s quiet reply. Scornful words
violated the air.
“You
annoying bore, I am ready, but he has arrived hours early! At least let me button
my jacket.”
My,
my, someone had a saucy attitude.
Anders’s
scolding sniff punctuated the outburst. He thinned his lips before he twitched
his right brow. He appeared ready to rip out a servant’s unruly soul.
“Excuse
me, my Prince, there seems to be—”
A short young man dressed in a stylish black suit, not
the normal dull rust livery, hastened from the left into the foyer. His abrupt
arrival sent agitated waves through the foyer.
How
odd. Why did I feel his agitation?
He
rapidly buttoned his knee-length frock coat over his black silver-embroidered
vest, adjusted his jacket, looked up, and froze, before he regained his
composure and stared at the floor. He used his long black hair to curtain his
face.
“A
thousand pardons, Master Anders, erm, my esteemed Prince.” His melodic voice—ah,
what an interesting accent—sounded breathless. “Forgive my shameful
tardiness and unseemly behavior. Please forgive me. Please.”
The
young man bowed lower until I feared for his balance. He straightened back up
and took two more steps. He halted and bowed in a fresh dire tip. His short
stature allowed his long hair to sweep the ebony marble floor. The two black
hues swallowed each other.
Powers
on High, his lively arrival rivaled an actor’s drama. My calming laugh fought
against the unwelcome tension. “Please, young man, no need to fret. Cease the
relentless bowing. Your constant up-and-down motion makes me dizzy.”
He
needed to cease, since I wanted to see the fair face again to confirm my
amazement.
The
young man looked up. “Yes, my gracious Prince. My apologies.”
The
words emerged from full lips set in a deep copper-hued, high-cheekboned face.
Delicate violet swirls started at his right temple and meandered to his chin
before winding around his neck. The languid swirls imitated wild Nerdean canyon
rose canes—graceful, yet deadly. In the Southern Desert, the hunting canes
hooked into their victims. The canes trapped their prey until the carnivorous
blooms fed on the flesh. Since the roses sprang from old magic, they resisted
all known modern pesticides.
There,
today my knowledge of other races served me well. Before me stood a Southern Totandia elf of the ruling rank. The violet canes showed the
elf’s startlingly high status. Up North we seldom saw Totandians. Their ancient
race now hid in the deep Nerdean canyonlands edging against the inhospitable South Inatoli Desert. They believed in nature’s rule and nothing else.
Their attitude challenged modern thinking. In the past, my ruthless Serpent
family had used lethal efficiency to ferret them out from the realm. Their
subtle magics and strange, secret culture made the elves a target. After nearly
destroying the race, now our country regarded them as handy slave fodder.
Delicate in stature, they usually acted docile and nonviolent.
My
scholarly heart regretted the destruction of such a mysterious race.
Still, the male’s features had a distinctly human
cast, especially in the strong cheekbones and firm chin. As I recalled, pure
elves had narrow faces and extremely pointed chins. No hint of the uniquely
slanted Totandian eye structure met my examination, but his eyes displayed the
unusual violet color befitting his noble rank. The robust coppery skin and one
pointed ear tip peeking past his hair screamed elf, yet his long narrow nose
appeared too pronounced for an elf’s. His compact muscular build also refuted
his elven heritage.
Before
me stood an exotic human-elven mixture, rare to see in this age.
Even
more curious—something about the refined features sparked a hazy memory. How
odd.
Another
deep bow almost followed before the male conquered his instinct. He
respectfully inclined his head. His wavy mane drifted around his face.
“I am
Alasdaire, my esteemed Prince. During your visit here, my duty is to serve you
to my full ability.”
To my
surprise, Anders released a quiet but pointed huff. Coming from him, the sound
counted as a cruel slap across the young man’s face.
“Yes,
my Prince, since he knows you travel sans your normal staff, Lord Keith
arranged for Alasdaire to be your personal slave.” Anders sniffed. “That is, if
you will allow a lowly half-breed slave to serve you.”
Powers
on High, I could have ice-skated on Anders’s last words. I disliked how Anders
emphasized the slave aspect. I thought Keith had servants, not slaves. Hmm, a
hidden story lurked here. I certainly wanted to give the unusual male a chance,
especially since I understood what Alasdaire meant by serving me. Keith had
remembered my fondness for fascinating young men.
“How
lovely, yes, I heartily approve of my cousin’s special choice for me.” I
sounded positive and upbeat—in fact, I sounded nauseatingly charming. Dreadful.
“Anders, feel confident to leave me in Alasdaire’s company.”
I
smiled at the watchful young half-breed. He quickly looked at the floor. Hmm,
no mutual flirtation from a pleasure slave? Why?
“Very
good, my Prince. If this particular slave annoys you, please let me know
immediately. I shall correct the staffing error. Above all, I desire your
complete satisfaction.”
Anders
shot Alasdaire a deadly glare. I wondered why Anders despised this glorious
male. Ah, sadly, the prejudice against elves ran strong in many men’s hearts.
Such ill behavior from the normally stoic head butler bothered me.
Despite
my annoyance, I nodded. “Thank you, Anders.”
Anders
bowed and glared at Alasdaire one last time before he turned on his heel like a
king departing from a council meeting. Even I never acted that regal. He paused
to swivel back toward me.
“Ah, I almost forgot, my Prince. Master Adrian has
comms from the palace for you.”
I
managed not to sigh. “No surprise there, Anders. I’ll check in with Adrian later.”
Another
stiff bow answered me. “Very good, my Prince.”
Around
us, bustling footmen finished carrying my belongings up the grand staircase. I
winced. Had I really brought along that much luggage? Gerald must have packed
enough outfits to last for months. I would have been happy with one formal
suit, casual clothing, and plenty of underwear.
I
glanced back toward Alasdaire. He still frowned after Anders’s retreating back
before he realized I watched his ire. He inclined his head with silent apology,
then gazed up at me. In a flash, his expression turned blank as he banished his
former passion.
“My
Prince, it is time to create today’s schedule. Lord Keith and his guests
currently attend Lord Lazio’s grand picnic. Do you want to join them?”
I held
up my hand. “Please, absolutely not, Alasdaire. I wish to enjoy a light lunch
along with a not so light drink, then a bath. Perhaps I’ll act slothful and
indulge in a nap.”
I
grinned with glee. Ahh, the thought of sprawling against a feather mattress
thrilled my aching body. The last war had destroyed my stalwart constitution.
Before this past week, a carriage ride had never defeated my body. My constant
exhaustion bothered me. At least I knew no one had poisoned me—a personal ward
spell guaranteed protection from common poisons.
My
brother Edward had already tried to poison me.
He had
regretted the attempt.
“Of
course, my noble Prince. I shall arrange for your supreme comfort.”
Alasdaire
signaled to four watching young pages. They stepped forward. He leaned down to
issue orders. The boys bowed and scurried off in different directions.
Alasdaire
turned back. He gracefully gestured forward.
“My
Prince, I trust you enjoyed a pleasant journey from Rahalda? I understand the
weather embraced calm, sunny conditions, unlike the recent unruly storms.”
“Pleasant
enough, although it was a long journey. Five days of carriage travel taxed my
old body.”
At
least the young slave chatted with me. Normally everyone acted dumbstruck
around this so-called mighty prince. Still, his words sounded mechanical and
rehearsed, merely a pleasure slave’s trained interest. But I sensed his
uniqueness. I wondered how many times Alasdaire had entertained Keith’s
guests? Did he despise his pleasure-slave status? Hmm.
Usually the pretty young men in such positions were well-treated, pampered
pets, since they supplied the master or mistress discreet pleasure. Judging by
how basely Anders treated him, this manor did not regard Alasdaire as special.
How foolish of them. I certainly looked forward to enjoying this exotic
creature’s company.
My
self-pitying sigh made me sound in need of comfort. “I confess I feel battered
as an old boot.”
“Now
you may relax. You will be pleased to hear fresh weather graces us, Prince. The
late-spring storms have passed on their way east. You will enjoy a lovely
visit.” Alasdaire mounted the carved staircase.
Interesting.
My new companion ignored my baiting
words. He wasn’t prone to abject fawning. I appreciated the trait. I followed
Alasdaire, taking the opportunity to admire his knee-high, pearl-button boots.
The supple black leather sculpted his strong calves into delicious fullness.
We
traveled down the long hall. Dreary portraits depicting dour deceased ancestors
cluttered the walls. During my childhood visits, Keith and I had made up silly
names for them. Lady Hortense Horseface, Duke Dreadful Drooler, and Sir Sticky
Spankalot still scowled at me with painted menace. I scowled back at them.
About the Author
Thirty years ago, I started writing gay male romance.
Writing about men inserting tab A into slot B didn’t seem the norm for a
suburban female teenager. Reading Gordon Merrick, John Rechy and Larry Kramer
helped me fill in the serious informational gaps. Yes, I read those books in my
bedroom. No wonder.
As the years progressed, I still wrote gay male romance,
although the stories progressed from lurking in notebooks to hiding on the
computer. I wrote fantasies, contemporaries, bodice rippers; I chugged along
following my goofy muse.
Now I’m glad I kept the writing faith. I never thought I’d
have published novels. Imagine, my comedy An Elf for All Centuries (Silver
Publishing; now in talks for a new home) was in the running for a few awards.
The novel didn’t win, but come on, what a thrill.
My life has turned into a fun quandary of too many stories
hindered by my slow, two-fingered typing skills. I blunder onward into more
trauma, drama, and humor. I just hope I can keep up with sexy men who insist on
running off with the plots!
Check out my latest releases:
Love in the Shadows, my first attempt at mixing M/M historic
and contemporary with a touch of the supernatural, is at MLR Press.
My M/M romdramedy (romance/drama/comedy) The
Gospel According to Cher is now at Dreamspinner,
home to my novellas, assorted short stories, and the novel Cupid Knows Best.
Facebook: S.A.
Garcia
Twitter: SAGarcia_Writer
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Thanks for having me here, Dawn!
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