Creating characters for Fateful Waters
The creation of characters for this
novel was one of the more enjoyable aspects of writing the book. I wanted my
heroine to be a modern woman who had to work her way through collage. She had
to be independent, smart, and resourceful. Our heroine needed to be out of
place in her new environment. So, I created an all female household for her
formative years. Lexie was born.
Melinda, her friend and roommate
needed to be her polar opposite. She needed to be hunting for Mr. Right, the
last thing on Lexie’s mind. Very social but mistrustful of hometown guys who
knew how wealthy her family was. She falls for an online match that convinces
her to spend the summer with him as soon as she graduates.
Okay now I have my heroine and her
sidekick, and a reason for their trip from their homes near the shores of Lake
Erie to the Texas Panhandle.
Now we need a hero. A big broad
shouldered hunk, but he needs to be Lexie’s last idea of a love interest. He
needs to be used to giving orders and having others instantly obey. Cutter also
needs to be complex with vulnerabilities beneath his gruff no nonsense persona.
David,
Melinda’s online Romeo, needed to be very attractive. He also needed to be
smooth talking and seductive, but with ulterior motives.
That was the basic idea for the main
characters; they took shape and were fleshed out as the book took shape. In the
first draft I found myself not liking our hero. His first life was trashed and
rewritten. Other minor characters were added to advance the storyline and add
some intrigue, a sense of lurking evil, and a couple of unlikely allies.
Often the characters take on a
physical form in my imagination. At that time I add a physical description to
my original character sketch. Then I print that study out to have it to refer
to as I work through the story and weave my plot into the lives of characters
that have come to life.
I know that I have it right when my
editor, and proofreaders are in agreement. One more test, after copyright, is
the review process, which can often lead to more revisions. The last test is
the reaction of my beta readers.
Success! Time to send it to the
publisher, and wait for the print release.
Fateful Waters was released the first
of October 2012 and sales at book signings and Holiday Events were brisk.
Reviews are really good and fans are asking when the sequel “Firestorm of the
Heart” will be released. I have to remind them that there is a two-year time
lag in the story, which is previewed at the end of “Fateful Waters.”
Readers can read more excerpts,
reviews, and release dates of works in progress at my web site. http://talesbyjackie.com
Keep an eye on my web site or my blog http://jackieanton.com for the Video Book
Trailer for “Fateful Waters.”
Thank
you Dawn for hosting the virtual book tour for Fateful Waters. I wish you, your
family, and your followers all the best in the New Year.
The following excerpt is a sneak
preview of “Firestorm of the Heart” exclusively for the followers of Dawn’s
Reading Nook.
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Eve’s nerves were raw, and her mother’s constant complaining about the
decline of the airline industry was not helping her condition. She was having
second thoughts about Booker. He made her feel young again. It had been a long
time since she been in a serious relationship with a man. She had met Booker
while planning her daughter’s wedding. Now, it was her turn to walk down the
aisle, and she hoped things would not be as tumultuous for her and Booker as
her daughter’s relationship was with her tall Texan.
Lexie was the reason for the
plane trip to the Texas Pan- handle. Eve had made the mistake of telling her
daughter that Booker had proposed. Lexie grabbled the bull by the horns, so to speak, and made arrangements to have the wedding at a small
church near the ranch that she and her little family attended. Mom and she
would be staying at her daughter and son-in-law’s home until the pending
nuptials. Mom was going to visit while she and Booker went on a two-week
honeymoon. Eve sure hoped that Lexie knew what she was doing. Mom wasn’t as
spry as she used to be, but she was just as opinionated and quarrelsome.
Eve’s intended had driven
them to Hopkins. He accompanied them to baggage check-in and that was as far as
anyone not on the flight could go. That had started Mom on the good old days
when family or friends could wait in the boarding area and see the plane leave
the gate. She had been on a rant since, and Eve thought that maybe her mother
was just nervous about flying. Booker would be flying in tomorrow with the
Potters in their private jet. That was Lexie’s doing, too. When she found out
that Booker had asked Patrick Boyd to be his best man, she switched from matron
of honor to bridesmaid. Lexie relinquished the honored spot, using the excuse
that she could pair up with her husband, who was Booker’s only choice as an
usher. Eve couldn’t shake the feeling that her daughter and her soon-to-be
groom were teamed up as an unlikely pair of matchmakers. Eve had been back for
little Benjamin’s christening, and last June for his first birth- day, but
Melinda had not been back since the summer of 2011 when the girls graduated
from Ohio State.
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Follow
Melinda Potter and Alexandra Parker, across the country, as the friends travel
from their home on the shores of Lake Erie to the
drought-stricken state of Texas . After
graduation from The Ohio State University, Melinda has a date with an online
Romeo. Lexie, who is supposed exert a moderating influence on her impulsive
friend, winds up in a hospital where she wakes to everyone calling her Mrs.
Ross. She doesn’t have a clue how she
got there, or who Mr. Ross is.
Teaser Excerpt:
“Are you in a hurry to be hamburger? I could have run you
over in this blinding rain! Now, look, you’ve killed Mel’s Cadillac.” The beast
wouldn’t move out of the road. Pushing on its rump didn’t accomplish anything,
nor did smacking it on the hip. That little bout of temper left her with a
stinging hand.
The white face was halter-less—it’s not a horse, she reminded herself—and she didn’t have a rope
or even a belt. Now nearly knee-deep in slop, she stood there, hands on her
hips, glaring at the cow. While she was assessing the situation, the cow let
out a bellow. A small echo bounced back from a few feet away. Lexie spotted a
small calf stuck in the mud. All that was visible was the head and a small
portion of its back. The little one was sinking in a run-off of muck that had
flowed from the slightly higher terrain behind it.
She removed her navy jacket that had matched her now trashed
slacks. Lexie waded closer to the calf, hoping she didn’t sink along with it.
Keeping a wary eye on its watchful mother, she slipped the jacket around the
calf’s neck and gave a tug. She managed to raise its head a little higher, but
it was stuck and could not get any traction to assist in its rescue attempt.
Giving a little stronger tug she lost her own traction. She was sitting on her
butt in the mud, propping up the small creature’s head when the ghost riders
just appeared from out of the storm.
About the Author and links:
Jackie. Anton is the author of Backyard Horse Tales: Sox 2nd Edition recepient of the
prestigious Mom’s Choice Award. She makes her home in Northeastern
Ohio .
Mother of two adult Children and a Grandmother she and her
husband of forty-one years live on a small farm in Medina
Township . As author of the family
friendly series Backyard Horse Tales (readers age 8-adult) her adult novels are
written under the pen name J.M. Anton.
An avid
horseperson she and her husband continue to ride daily. She loves a good
mystery as well as working out the day-to-day struggles and complexities of
human relationships. Find out more about the author on her blog “Writing for
readers in a .com world. http://jackieanton.com
LINKS:
New
author web site: http://talesbyjackie.com
E-Mail:
talesbyjackie@yahoo.com
5 comments:
Thank you, Dawn, for hosting my book tour.
J.M. Anton
I just added an autographed copy of this book to an additional random commenter to be selected from this blog and the next four stops. (USA mailing only) Just add USA to the end of your comment to get in on the book drawing.
Good Luck to everyone, and thanks for all your comments.
J.M. Anton
Loved your comments on how you chose your heroine and hero. Very clever. Loved the excerpt for this story and also for the sequel.
I enjoyed reading about creating the characters, it was very interesting. Thank you.
Kit3247(at)aol(dot)com
Jackie,
Extraordinary post!! I loved every word and look forward to reading your work. All the best and keep your stories coming!!
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