Earthman's Bride started out as a short story
which ran away with my imagination. I
knew what I wanted to say, but the story had been told many times before with
many variations: a young woman given to
a conqueror as part of a peace agreement...he desires her...she fears
him,...eventually they fall in love... So how to make it different, and not
just a rehash of every book ever written on that theme? Would changing the setting help? Making it
medieval...paranormal...futuristic? And
the conqueror? Should he be a
warrior...a beast...a supernatural entity, perhaps an older man, inured to the
cruelty of war...or a much younger one, still able to find some tenderness in
his life?
There are too many science fiction stories of invaders from
other planets coming to Earth a la War of the Worlds, but all of them
are told from the Earth's point of view.
That settled it for me. Do
the old switcheroo. Make the Earthmen
the conquerors, barging into another a galaxy like barbarians, pillaging and
conquering.
My Earthmen aren't barbarians but they’re definitely not
nice people. Having depleted their own
natural resources, they head to the stars looking for planets having the
elements they lack, and they were ruthless in their determination to get what
they wanted. Using force, they
"accept" these worlds into the Federation, placing them under their
"protection" and then haul their natural resources back to
Terra. Since most of the planets are
less developed than theirs, it's easy to subdue them with superior firepower
and take what they want.
Unfortunately, when they got to Tusteya, that changed. The Tusteyans received the Terrans in peace
but within 30 minutes of their meeting, peaceful intentions go flying out the
window. Though not as technologically
advanced, the Tusteyans weren't about to allow themselves to be enslaved by
aliens. And so the war began…and lasted
for 30 years, until Alcin Spearman, leader of the Elius, asks for a truce, and
to show the sincerity of his intentions, offers his 17-year-old daughter Rebeka
to the new Governor to cement the peace.
Alcin is certain the young Earthman will want Rebeka, and once he meets
her, Philip--being young and male--definitely does. What Philip doesn’t know, however, that his
bride-to-be has an agenda other than simply being a peace offering. Once Rebeka has gained his trust, she's to
kill him, and during the chaos of his death, her father and his men will storm
the palace and end the Terran tyranny once and for all.
Not wanting to become a murderer, Rebeka agrees because she
has no choice. She goes into the
marriage willingly, hoping against hope that some miracle will occur to prevent
her from killing her new husband.
Nevertheless, everything appears to be going just as her father
wishes... She is completely alone except
for the presence of Darius, a Terran android re-programmed to protect her. Unknown even to Rebeka, however, Darius has
his own agenda. He is capable of human
emotion and has fallen in love with the woman whom he has been ordered to
protect while she kills his former pupil.
And then, two things happen:
Philip discovers Darius’ feelings for his wife, and blackmails his
former teacher with the threat of telling Rebeka unless he’s a little less
outspoken in her presence, and Rebeka
falls in love with Philip as she discovers he isn’t the monster her father and
everyone think he is…
Three beings with emotions rapidly reaching the boiling
point. Which will overflow first?
Earthman’s Bride placed first in the 2008
Maryland Romance Writer’s “Reveal Your Inner Vixen” contest in the alternate?SF
category. Here’s the winning excerpt:
In his office, Rebeka sat at the little
table with Master Martin, going over the drawings and diagrams, reeling off
names of body parts and how they functioned and what would stimulate them,
while Darius lounged on the little window seat across the room, his big body
looking too large for that small space. One elbow leaning on the raw wood, he
rested his chin in his hand, eyes half closed, appearing totally disinterested
in what was going on. Gradually, he
allowed the grey lassitude preceding dormancy to slide over him.
It was only when Master
Martin took the book from Rebeka, snapped it shut and stood up, calling to him,
“Darius, would you come here, please?” that the android roused, shaking his
head to clear the cobwebs of near-deactivation from it, and obeyed.
“Certainly, Master.” Three strides
brought him to stand between Martin and Rebeka. “How may I help you?”
“Take off your tunic.”
“S-sir?” For an instant, Darius was
certain he’d misunderstood. Just stood there, unmoving. Surely he doesn’t mean…
Rebeka, who had been
staring at the teacher, turned her attention to him, mouth open. She seemed to
be holding her breath.
“You heard me, Darius. Take off
your tunic. You must obey, you know.” This was said very softly, but Martin’s
quiet tone seemed threatening.
Mouth set in a hard, straight line,
Darius did as he was told, untying the sash at his waist and pulling the tunic
over his head. Master Martin took it
from his hands and dropped it over his chair, too far away for him to reach,
then waved a hand in the android’s direction.
“There he is, Rebeka. A naked male.
He’s exactly like a human. Look him over well.”
Darius bit his lip and took a deep
breath.
Rebeka stared. Directly at his crotch.
To his surprise, she didn’t blush
or avert her eyes. Instead, she continued to look at his penis as if it was the
most fascinating item she’d ever seen.
Under her gaze, he shifted uncomfortably.
Master Martin broke the silence.
“Now, Rebeka, you know it all. Show me the erogenous zones.”
She looked at her teacher.
Had to practically force her eyes
away from me, Darius thought, resentfully.
Taking a deep breath, she
said, like a bored schoolchild reciting a lesson, “First, there’s the ear
lobes.” She hesitated, pointing vaguely. “Should I touch him, Master Martin?
No, damn it! You old bastard, you’d
better not say what I think you’re going to!
The old man nodded and said the one
thing Darius had hoped he wouldn’t hear. “Show me, Rebeka, how you’ll arouse
your husband.”
“Master—” Darius began a protest.
“Quiet, Darius! Just stand
there. Be obedient and silent.”
So Darius remained where he was,
mouth set grimly, as Rebeka reached up and caught his left earlobe between her
forefinger and thumb. Her touch was so
gentle that for a moment, he barely felt it.
Abruptly, she put her other hand behind his neck, pulling his head down.
Her body was so close to his he could feel its warmth. He wanted to put his
arms around her, hold her closer. It was an effort to make his hands remain at
his sides.
Standing on tiptoe, she began to
nibble on his earlobe, breath warm and soft against his skin. Darius shivered slightly, then forced himself
to be still as he felt her tongue trace itself around the edge of his ear.
If I were to…straighten… he
began, recognizing that his thoughts suddenly were becoming erratic…but he
didn’t move, continuing to stand, leaning forward with his head trapped in
Rebeka’s embrace.
When she released him, allowing him
to stand upright again, he relaxed, but then her hand slid down his shoulder to
his chest, and her mouth trailed kisses along the same path. One finger encircled his left nipple, its
fingernail scoring invisible grooves around and around it as Rebeka pressed her
lips against the other, mouthing it gently. Darius took a deep breath that was
almost a gasp.
She looked up at him. “Is something
wrong, Darius?”
“No,” he lied, hastily. “I was just
taking in extra oxygen. I have to do that to renew my pneumatic cells so I can
appear to breathe.” He took a couple of
extra deep breaths to demonstrate.
“That’s enough oxygen, I think.” Master
Martin—the son of a bitch—-smiled slightly.
Rebeka turned her attention back to
Darius’s body, moving even closer so her own was pressed against his. Darius closed his eyes. God, she’s so
warm, so soft. I’m going to kill Master Martin! As certain as Tusteya’s sun
rises each morning, I’m going to tear the old fart limb from limb to pay him
back for this!
When Rebeka embraced him, Darius
nearly recoiled as her hands slid to the small of his back, encircling his
buttocks, fingernails performing that little scratch-and-arouse making the tiny
sensors in his outer dermis bristle invisibly to attention. Her fingers floated
over the deep separation of his cheeks, hesitated at the rough repair to the
tattered skin on his left hip, then circled under them, squeezing lightly.
Darius’ body began to tremble, skin quivering.
Releasing him, she stepped back,
brushing one hand across his stomach, circling the little depression that had
never been attached to any umbilicus, bending to kiss and gently lap at it, her
tongue flicking delicately into the little dimple.
The tremor grew stronger. He was
visibly shaking now.
“Darius?” Feeling the sudden shiver, she looked up at
him.
He didn’t answer, wouldn’t look at
her, eyes riveted on something on the far side of the room. Rebeka stepped away from him. It was all he could do not to heave an
audible sigh of relief. She didn’t look
at Master Martin, didn’t see the broad smile now framing the teacher’s mouth,
but Darius did and silently cursed the old man.
“Go on, Rebeka,” Master Martin
ordered.
“That’s all.” She looked from Darius to the teacher, then
gestured vaguely. “E-except for…” She
nodded at the android’s genitals, still—thankfully—at rest.
“Go on, Rebeka,” Master Martin’s
voice was softer now, very gentle, as if he was afraid of frightening her.
No—oh, no! Darius’s eyes met
the old man’s. He took a deep breath, preparing to protest, grab his clothes,
stalk out.
As if he realized the android’s
thoughts, Martin shook his head. “Darius, what’s the first tenet of your
programming?”
“I will obey the commands of my
human makers to the best of my ability.” The words were spoken with a total
absence of inflection. Dammit! He
had to do what the teacher said. His will was his own only when it didn’t clash
with human wishes, and it would take a great effort to override that order.
“Go on, Rebeka,” Master Martin
repeated.
Obediently, she slid her hand under
Darius’ testicles. He flinched.
Suddenly, she seemed to freeze, just standing there, head down, staring at his
penis. His balls were cupped by warm hands, chafed gently. The android’s gasp
was so sharp it startled her. His face was expressionless though his jaw
muscles tightened, as if he were gritting his teeth.
Rebeka stroked one forefinger along
his penis, from base to tip, finger brushing back and forth across the crown.
“It’s so soft!” There was wonder in her voice.
“T-the c-covering of t-the glans
p-penis has been c-compared to the skin of a two-day-old n-newborn,” Daris
spoke up. In spite of his stutter, his
voice was tightly controlled, almost constricted, practically biting off the
words.
Rebeka continued to caress
him. She didn’t see Darius’ hands curl
into fists, or how his jaws abruptly clamped or the deep flush sweeping over
his face. He was angry and trapped, caught in her hands, being fondled as if
his organ was a timid animal. Well, in a few more minutes, that timid
animal’s going to turn into a raging beast!
Rebeka pressed her lips
against the soft head. His tolerance point snapped.
Ignoring the painful ripple surging
through his system at disobeying a human command, he seized her by the
shoulders, jerking her upright, gasping aloud with relief as his penis slid
from her hands. Darius pulled her up to
face him and then his mouth was on hers, tongue sliding inside as her lips
opened in surprise. It brushed against her own, laved over and under it, then
he was sucking its tip almost desperately before he thrust her away. She
staggered and nearly fell as he released her, staring up at him with startled
eyes. Slowly, one hand went to her mouth.
“That’s what you’ll get if you do
that to Philip Hamilcar—and more.” His voice was harsh, husky with emotion,
chest heaving as if he were struggling to breathe. “I think, Mistress Rebeka,
your lessons are over.”
Earthman's Bride will be available from Class
Act Books on April 15, 2012.
4 comments:
What an entertaining excerpt! Poor Darius...
I think I love Darius. Can I have a robot like that? Very tempting excerpt.
It's amazing how many people like Darius over Philip. I admit that, this time around, I re-wrote Philip's part in the story in an attempt to make him more sympathetic. It'll be interesting to see how it goes.
Can I have an android like Darius?
I have to add this book to my wish list after reading that excerpt :D
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